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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

It took me awhile, but I have just finished reading all of the poems in this post, and what a treasure trove it is! These 'liberated verses', beginning with the outstanding 'Fascination With Light' are all truly fascinating examples of how to write free verse that is unmistakably poetry and not prose in disguise. A marvellous achievement!

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'Liberated verse' should not, in my opinion, be just a piece of prose chopped into bite-size pieces that give it the appearance of real poetry. I think that free verse, without any music in it isn't poetry at all. But all the poems you've included here are true poetry, and poetry at its best, for that very reason. You simply have a great musical ear!

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