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"Fascination with Light" is a brilliant poem, Mike, and is just perfect the way you have it. But you also include a verse from a longer version that is way too good to discard. Can you possibly make it into a poem in its own right, with its own title etc.? I really like it.

"And still it returns on incessant wings—

ruthless grey monarch of the night air.

It flutters and stares

with huge primitive eyes, and it sees

beyond ruinous nights

to all the loveliness inherent there;

and it sings all the hideous despair

of its unworthiness, in a frenzy of wings;

and its desolate womb holds incurled in silk

the husks of dread kings and pale lovers."

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