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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

I love Sulpicia's candidness, her delicacy of thought and phrase - and, most of all, her difficult-to-control desires.

I'll restack this one. What a fine translation it is! You make her sound ancient, modern, and timeless - all at the same time.

VI. Her Apology for Errant Desire

by Sulpicia

loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch

Let me admit my errant passion to you, my love,

since in these last few days

I've exceeded all my foolish youth's former follies!

And no folly have I ever regretted more

than leaving you alone last night,

desiring only to disguise my desire for you!

Michael R. Burch's avatar

I suspect Sappho was one of Sulpicia's influences. Neither could control desire and neither took rejection well.

Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

They were obviously aware of their own immense gifts. so rejecting rejection would be natural enough to them.

Tom Merrill's avatar

Like beauty? Which experience teaches to believe in its irrestibleness? Yet surprises are in store for them. Beauty can sometimes look exactly like Godzilla.

Michael R. Burch's avatar

I have the impression this Beauty had a bit of Beast within when she didn't have her way.