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Robert Funderburk's avatar

I liked all of these poems, especially "She Was Very Strange, and Beautiful" I just finished a grouping of five similiar to your "gentle" poems called, "The Innocent Years, All Seems Eternal" The last poem is:

Before the Fall

We rambled through the woods so green

Beneath a sky of purest blue

And all the world was fresh and clean

And we were young and glad and true

Beneath a tall and sheltering pine

We lay down to rest awhile

And your heart was close to mine

And all our joy was in your smile

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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

I like your post so I restacked it with this comment:

This is another treasure trove of excellent poetry by Mike Burch focusing on feelings. I especially like this haiku.

Brittle autumn leaf,

how was I to know

you were my life?

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