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Burnt Eliot's avatar

"...when I encountered the poem the first time, that was the image and sound I heard..."

Perhaps your study of Eastern Mystics shows though? You did it well. I feel the presence perhaps of Dogen.

Sensations of rich scenes and variable time.

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Michael R. Burch's avatar

Did the mystics contribute to my translations? Could be. In any case, I'm glad you liked them.

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