These are all good, and the translations of the Greek epigrams for the most part well capture their typical economical elegance. I think though that the version of the famous Simonides epigram alters its basic meaning too fundamentally to be called even a free translation, though there would be nothing wrong with calling it a response to or commentary on the original.
One reason the epigram is famous is how it praises the Spartans in a characteristically "Laconic" form -- the Spartans were famous using few words. I forget now where I read an anecdote about a time when the Spartans and the Athenians were fighting a war together as allies, and an Athenian detachment, being in difficulties, sent the Spartan forces a long message detailing what aid they needed. The Spartans sent back a reply that the Athenians' message was too long for them to understand (was this the first instance in history of TL;DR?) So the Athenians sent the Spartans another message saying simply, "Need food." The Spartans sent them food, along with a reply message pointing out that the word "Need" had been superfluous.
First, thanks for taking the time to read and for the feedback. I call my translations "loose translations" and "interpretations" to let readers know that I am taking certain poetic liberties. Or I say that I am writing "after" the original poet. I enjoyed your anecdote but "Hamlet" might not be as entertaining if reduced to a single word.
How truly brilliant and atmospheric 'How Long the Night Is'. It is indeed a little known treasure - a true gem!
Yes, and hopefully my translation will help it become more of a known treasure, especially if other people share it, as you have.
It’s so good, I’ve just restacked it with a comment so that they can do precisely that.
Thanks, it's a gem that deserves more attention.
These are all good, and the translations of the Greek epigrams for the most part well capture their typical economical elegance. I think though that the version of the famous Simonides epigram alters its basic meaning too fundamentally to be called even a free translation, though there would be nothing wrong with calling it a response to or commentary on the original.
One reason the epigram is famous is how it praises the Spartans in a characteristically "Laconic" form -- the Spartans were famous using few words. I forget now where I read an anecdote about a time when the Spartans and the Athenians were fighting a war together as allies, and an Athenian detachment, being in difficulties, sent the Spartan forces a long message detailing what aid they needed. The Spartans sent back a reply that the Athenians' message was too long for them to understand (was this the first instance in history of TL;DR?) So the Athenians sent the Spartans another message saying simply, "Need food." The Spartans sent them food, along with a reply message pointing out that the word "Need" had been superfluous.
First, thanks for taking the time to read and for the feedback. I call my translations "loose translations" and "interpretations" to let readers know that I am taking certain poetic liberties. Or I say that I am writing "after" the original poet. I enjoyed your anecdote but "Hamlet" might not be as entertaining if reduced to a single word.
Walking to Paradise !!! Priceless gift !!
Irma, I'm glad you think so. And thanks for reading and commenting.
My Pleasure Sir !! Keep feeding our mind and soul .!
Your wish is my command!