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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

Poems that are concerned with death or the brevity of life have a great resonance for all of us, and this fine haiku encapsulates so much:

Both victor and vanquished are dewdrops:

flashes of light

briefly illuminating the void.

—Ôuchi Yoshitaka, loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch

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Michael R. Burch's avatar

That is a stunning metaphor, I believe.

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Geraldine A. V. Hughes's avatar

There’s the drop the eternal drop

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Michael R. Burch's avatar

As long as the poems aren't a drip!

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Michael R. Burch's avatar

I'm glad not to be a big drip!

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Geraldine A. V. Hughes's avatar

Right, and a thought found me, what would a haiku or poem say about “a big drip” I would bank on, that you could make that drip come alive. Sunday is in the air, have a holy and pleasant one, Sir. Geraldine

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Michael R. Burch's avatar

I hope you have a very pleasant Sunday.

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William Boyd's avatar

I was taken by Roshu.'s no nonsense approach: "this final changing of robes"

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Michael R. Burch's avatar

Yes, an excellent metaphor.

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